In writing I am learning to use detail to make my story interesting.i feel proud because I do interesting stories. I need to work finishing quickly.
Monday, 30 May 2016
My weekend
On Friday I went bowling and I won the competition. I got 52 tickets. I won lots of candy! It was so delicious and I stayed up late. I tried to get a panda but I missed! I got to go to my nanas because it was 10.00 at NIGHT! I fell asleep in the car but my baby sister woke me up! She was so sick because I hade the flu the day before. I said "I want to go to nanas house because it's easier I want to go to sleep!" Mum said " really? It's only 1 minute away and our house is 5 minute away!" I watch a scary movie it was so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so scary! I made a ring for Anamika . It is a shooting star! A rainbow ring!
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Keep working hard to add more detail to your work. Well done on your progress so far. Mrs Platt and Mrs Robertson.
Good weekend storey
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